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Hello all, I was wonder if you guys could do me a favour im curently writing a story and i would really appreciate it you you guys could take a look and tell me what you think the story is on wattpad.com a very realiable site and i promise no virus' lol http://www.wattpad.com/432962-cursed-the-maiden-of-the-flames it would really help it you guys could read comment or possibly vote to lol makes me feel half decent at writing^^ haha and tell me what you think blessed be all and thanks to all who read ~Moon | |
--Witches are born with fire in their hearts,and magic in their souls.
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Sure I will probally take a look at it in a few days! | |
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Haha thanks very much. Preciate it^^ | |
--Witches are born with fire in their hearts,and magic in their souls.
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Hey. Ill be glad to look at it, Moon. | |
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*claps* I appluad you!! With a standing ovation (i think thats how its spelled? lol.) That was wonderful and you most definitely have talent! Congrats! Id love to read more. | |
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Oh I just read it, I personally liked it very much. GOOD JOB!! | |
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-- Accusing a Wiccan of worshiping Satan, Is like accusing a Atheist of worshiping god.
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Haha thanks very much all^^ i will be writing more to it soon just coming up with ideas i thanks you guys for the input | |
--Witches are born with fire in their hearts,and magic in their souls.
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Limited Member Posts: 101 |
wow i love it!!!!! | |
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Thanks all who read it i'm still working on it just being lazy atm still going just an effort to keep ideas flowing | |
--Witches are born with fire in their hearts,and magic in their souls.
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Limited Member Posts: 33 |
It's pretty good but there are a few too many run-on sentences and the flow is a little awkward at points, because so many of the sentences are so long. The grammar is a little wacky, but nothing a beta/editor couldn't patch up. | |
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-- "I can play this life out a thousand times and still get nowhere." ♥ "You're wrong. You've started regressing."
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I've noticed the run on sentences to I tend to do it alot, tried to cut it out but bad habits die hard lol and i've never been great with grammar i'll fix it eventually tho lol too lazy to edit atm | |
--Witches are born with fire in their hearts,and magic in their souls.
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Hey all i just added the next chapter onto my story if anyone has the time to take a look that would be great, and please vote on it or comment if you can thanks ~ BB | |
--Witches are born with fire in their hearts,and magic in their souls.
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